Custom Pc anyone?!?!?!?!?!?!?

[Mikamas]

whatsup ....if anyone needs a Custom pc or a preconfigured one.....check this website out..





www.freewebs.com/aandacomputers

Mighty Mighty Mikamas

[JonnyK]

i personally wouldn't buy anything from there

[mikkyT]

Hi there, you have a nice idea, and what looks like a sound business to grow.

Unfortunately, you lack simple English skills that will enhance your web content.

Its no use having a website if you are portraying the wrong underlying signals to your potential customers.

At the moment, your web site tells me that you are building PCs in your spare time, perhaps out of your garage with a friend.

This may well be the case, but you don't want your potential customer to know that!!! Why would I trust someone, who can't form a simple English sentence, with my hard earnt cash?

The answer is, I shouldn't and wouldn't.

Take the time out to get your website spell checked and grammar checked. Ideally you need to totally rewrite it, use you original content as a building block. If you don't have the skills to do this (and realistically, why would you? You're a techy!!) hire someone to do it, you will certainly reap the rewards.

Eg, you don't say "Built computers before successfully", you would put something like:

We are highly experienced system builders, with X years experience and many customer satisfaction testimonies.

Eg, you don't say "Done repair Jobs such a graphic cards". You would say:

We perform any PC upgrade. From simple external device set-up and configuration to replacement graphics card and hard drives.


Please don't take this as a flame, more as constructive critisism to help you on the road to Nasdaq fame and fortune.

If I was a paying customer, the bottom line is: If you are too fucking lazy to even use a spell checker on your content, how do I know you will be able to put a heatsink on my CPU without "forgetting".

Edit: ... And Hamma thought I had nothing constructive to say! Bleh

[Prowler]

Originally posted by mikkyT
Hi there, you have a nice idea, and what looks like a sound business to grow.

Unfortunately, you lack simple English skills that will enhance your web content.

Its no use having a website if you are portraying the wrong underlying signals to your potential customers.

At the moment, your web site tells me that you are building PCs in your spare time, perhaps out of your garage with a friend.

This may well be the case, but you don't want your potential customer to know that!!! Why would I trust someone, who can't form a simple English sentence, with my hard earnt cash?

The answer is, I shouldn't and wouldn't.

Take the time out to get your website spell checked and grammar checked. If you don't have the skills to do this (and realistically, why would you? You're a techy!!) hire someone to do it, you will certainly reap the rewards.

Please don't take this as a flame, more as constructive critisism to help you on the road to Nasdaq fame and fortune.

Yep.

[MilitantB0B]

EDIT:

Simply visiting the website answered my question. :D Sorry about that, my brain is still fired from work. I went from going to sleep at 1:30 and waking up at noon to going to sleep at 1:30 and waking up at 7:30. I am a bit frazzled. Stupid job. :D