Check this out plz

[XSSCxRaven]

Guy's I have try my first attempt at a movie plz check it out and let me know what you think plz.

www.swordsworn.net scroll to the bottom and click on the DoA recruiting movie

[DeltaForceAlpha]

I thought it was a cool movie, but since it's a recruitment video, try showing more of your outfit doing special ops instead of solo action. Convince potential recruits to join your outfit and you may want to ost your movie on www.planetsidemovies.com

[ORANGE]

really cool movie however I do have some friendly advice please don't think me an asshole or anything, I noticed when your guys went into the gen room the guy filming dragged and dropped his rek and then later his second deci pack over if you just right click it it will automatically replace either the first rifle/pistol slot {depending on the type} or the open spot, also you camped the tubes with an mcg even though you had a deci pack, don't do that take the tubes down and quickly before they manage a rush from somewhere and push you out

[Meursault00]

At the end it should be: "have" and not "got"

Other than that, I love what you did. Pretty good for a Planetside video. A bit on the long side though, but that's okay.