Attack of the Radioactive Messiah

[Derfud]

This is a screenplay written by a friend of mine who attends my highschool, thought you guys might get a kick out of it.

http://www.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=1817055

[Mag-Mower]

huh... alright...

[Kyonye]

it's not bad, it just seems to be to easy to know what is gonna happen next. the lines are too fake....ok so i didn't find it amusing...i know if he puts work into it, it can be very good.

[Derfud]

Thats kind of the idea. He makes it completely obvious as to what will happen next. Also, he made this, the story of how his bike was stolen, translated into olde english.

http://www.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=1664708