So I made a rap ...

[dukeacem]

Check this out:

http://members.cox.net/dukeacem/dukerap.wav

Or for mp3 format:

http://members.cox.net/dukeacem/myrap.mp3

For my old school saying goodbye to ww2ol:

http://members.cox.net/dukeacem/Goodbye.wav

[Squeeky]

:huh:

[Hamma]

I will review this when I get home from work.

[ABRAXAAS]

You crazy cracker:huh:

[Bighoss]

I don't wanna download them in fear that my ears will bleed.

[Arshune]

You never know, he could have a beautiful singing voice.

[Fire_Monkey]

I'll listen when I get home from school.:D

[ho]

AHAHHAHAHHA CRAZY CRACKER...get a good mic

[Yuyi]

:stupid:

[dukeacem]

damn this is a tough crowd.

[ABRAXAAS]

Ok I listend to it again thinking maybee I was to criticle but seriously there poorly blended and you sound way to white to be rappin. you dont have the worst vocal abilitys I have ever heard,but this aint your fortee, I would suggest after some practice maybee some lounge music ;) or maybee just a class or 2 in audio editing and mixing .

other thans it kinda sucking ..Great job :D

[Arshune]

I don't care how bad his was, it can never be as horrible as the "I AM SKELETOR" song...textaloud+breakbeats+an unhealthy obsession with scatting=the greatest pain you'll ever feel without the aid of a car battery.

[Derv]

I think that you just need to raise your voice more and be more enthusiastic... You kinda sound like you are rapping under your breath, like you are asahmed of it or something. At least that's what I heard. Try doing that then reposting it, I think it will help a lot. You have to get excited about it, or it won't go with the background.

[Tobias]

Dont worry, I am sure it was good, they just arnt Rap fans.



You see Rap is kinda like queer sex.

Some people really love it, they think its the best thing in the world.

Most people however dont see the magic and want nothing to do with it. And, like queer sex, I dont like Rap.






(On a side note I am all for lesbian sex. I do think that is the greatest thing in the world)

[dukeacem]

I guess is true tobias lol!

Derv, did it first like you said and this way sounded a lot better, although I don't really like listening to it all that much myself hehe. My college buddies thought it was funny.

[ho]

but i like gay sex and i hate rap...weird

[ABRAXAAS]

Actually all I really listen to is rap ,and thats why I dont like it , it sounds like a answering machine message I used to make when I was younger. "stop drop shut em down open up shop,woah woah im not home right now" ;)

but you seem to be able to cary a note ok so try a little more enthusiasm ;)

[dukeacem]

lol ho :D

That might be a good answering machine message ... great idea :D