My first tune!

[SuperMorto]

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[Canaris]

I really like the tune & beat to it, I just think where it falls down his that higher pitched beep you have on it that sounds like a car alarm in time with the song that to me just doesn't sound right.

At about 2.40 you use a much deeper base "beep" before the snare drum and vocals that really compliments the music...... then the car alarm starts again and ruins it.

my 2 cents