I made a song, comments?

[Orlyoo]

I just made a song, and im not done yet, but i want some feed back from anyone so i can improve my work :)



Brochex - The Beginning - YouTube

Let me know your opinion :) thanks

[SeanNewBoy]

That was pretty good.

[Orlyoo]

thanks :p

[SaeS]

Pretty nice. It's just my preference but it could be just a lil' bit more edgy (if that's the right way to say it...) at certain parts.

Still, liked/shared. Keep them coming, it's nice to see new people that are into making music =)

Cheers~

[Canaris]

okay well I'll give you my disclaimer first, I don't have very much musical talent. I don't think I could do what you mixing a track/creating a song. So any opinion I have is merely from me liking to listen to music
Also I've been defiled by dubstep so anything I say these days is tainted hehe ;)

I like the song, has some great beats and was enjoyable, so kudos there :)

One thing that jumped out at me just felt that there was something odd or lacking, you begin a lovely build up at about 50 seconds in which builds 1.11 adding in the snare drum at and continues to build till about 1.26 then . . . . .stops, you slow right back down and the song continues. I was expecting a drop back in to high gear and the fast pace section to kick you before smoothing back out for another go of the slow part of the song.
Hope you get what I'm saying and that you continue to throw out some phat sounds to us :D

[Orlyoo]

thanks for the reply, yeah, im still working on the song, and its my first of many (i hope) that i will give out. but yeah, stay tuned and i hope i will make you guys happy :)


Yours Brochex

[Vancha]

It's a good first song. You can tell it's early work, but I'm not sure why. It's certainly not bad, so perhaps it's a lack of complexity or something. The best advice would probably be to keep making music and keep learning. One of these (http://www.reddit.com/r/music/faq) subreddits would probably help you.

I'm not sure you need to worry about a persona just yet, but I think I prefer Orlyoo/Orliyu ("or-lee-YOU") to Brochex. It reminds me simultaneously of "Bro" and Skrillex.

[Nakktmulle]

nice :D

[Chilintano]

That's a good track. Liked it.

[thilaka]

hi thnaks for your informatiion

[SeanNewBoy]

Nice.