Tell me what you think?

[Triggar]

I didn't mean to own you. I know how completely important it is for people to step up and deflate the ego for the sake of improving one's final output

Seriously, it isn't a personal attack. I would probably like you as a person if I knew more about you. I'm just trying to help you improve as a writer, you gotta be different! Give people a reason to keep reading.

[Kam]

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[ObnoxiousFrog]

Originally Posted by Kam

I'm 17, lonely, and seeking a relationship with a woman up to four years older than me. (And if your older than 21 Triggar that's ok, but you look so young in your picture in the other post. You know, the one with the gun.) I am uber at english and history, and I am obcessed with all wars. Now you know me. O yes, and I'm uber sexy.

Annnyway, thanks for advice.

Creepy?

I think def.

[Kam]

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[internetn]

OMG, this is funny... Well since he is one of the few to admit that he is a geek, props to him.. but again very creepy.. are you a stalker? My little brother is huge, has a huge ego, and well is a few other things
*cough* *** *cough*.. But even he isn't that desperate...

J/k.. but unfortunately I'm not joking about my bro...

Oh ya.. I forgot to add, thats a great.. err what would you call it, short story? Anyways nice work

[MattxMosh]

This thread is scaring me.

[Triggar]

Kam, I'm 22, and I might as well be married 'cause I'm not going anywhere

Internetn, don't be mean.

[Ivan]

Originally Posted by Triggar

...I might as well be married 'cause I'm not going anywhere ...

Sure you are! You're coming with me to Alaska to become snow dwelling tree people! And we'll shoot at tourists that come to ski and snowboard.

[Kam]

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[Triggar]

Ivan sometimes you scare me how you read my inner-most thoughts

EDIT: No Kam I don't think you're a stalker

[Ivan]

Originally Posted by Triggar

Ivan sometimes you scare me how you read my inner-most thoughts

You do realize you have no inner monolog and say everything out loud. I just hear it cause I'm in your closet.

[Triggar]

It's hot in there, want some lemonade?

[Ivan]

Yes please.

Back on topic...

Kam great little story. I'm going to have to side with Triggar as it's been done already in a sense if you know what I mean.

[Infernus]

Originally Posted by internetn

OMG, this is funny... Well since he is one of the few to admit that he is a geek, props to him.. but again very creepy.. are you a stalker? My little brother is huge, has a huge ego, and well is a few other things
*cough* *** *cough*.. But even he isn't that desperate...

J/k.. but unfortunately I'm not joking about my bro...

Oh ya.. I forgot to add, thats a great.. err what would you call it, short story? Anyways nice work

Hm? You rang?


Also... I'm gay and I would stalk triggar... so Kam is perfectly normal by my standards...

[Kam]

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