Blood Bath

Doop · 2004-01-26, 03:10 PM

As he was flying, he heard a small beep, and kicked on the afterburners. He knew he was going to die, and his reaver would go down with him. He wanted so bad to serve his empire before death. He lowered the nose torwards the Starfire MAX, and emptied as many rockets as he could by the time his reaver exploded. A corpse soaked in blood fell onto the ground.

Agent Codename: Windstorm, in his Starfire MAX, looked down. The corpse had a small, steel nametag engraved into it's chestpiece.

Archaon
Bloodhounds
48th Air Division

"One down, a hell of a lot more to go," he said.

"They got Archaon! Archaon, our best Reaver pilot!" Deathbat yelled.
"...WHAT?!" yelled Doop. He has never been so shocked in his life.
"Cetan, Amerish."
"No..."

Doop has been a childhood friend of Archaon since age 7. They went to school together, went into college together, and both agreed to volunteer in the "Auraxis Colonization" project in year 2054. When the war broke out, they met up and joined the New Conglomerate.

"Say there was a spawn tube link! Was able to respawn!" exclaimed Doop.
"No...the only spawn point left was Verica, and it was hacked."
Doop dropped his radio. He looked to his right, in the courtyard of Bio Laboratory Ikanam, which was currently under hack by the NC. He saw a sign, a flag. A ring, two daimonds branching off of it with a pillar in the middle. He stared at that flag, while a fierce flame built up inside of him.

Doop · 2004-01-26, 03:39 PM

Part 2: Can't Catch Me

Doop, still at Ikanam, was at the Vehicle Terminal.

Code:

(;/ CONSTRUCT: Basilisk 1)
id=DOOP 211406

As he typed that into the terminal, a Basilisk came up in about ten minutes. He went onto the pad and got onto it, and drove out of the base. Quasar gave him a mission to report back the status on Interlink Facility Qumu. He kept driving north, and eventually came to a perfect hill which he could spy from.

"Sir, I see about six Starfires on the roof providing sky-coverage, some stray Magriders in the courtyard and Spitfire Turrets, HE Mines and Motion Sensers scattered around the courtyard."
"Roger that, Doop. Do your stuff, paint it blue."

He went back into his Basilisk and parked 100 meters west of the backdoor to Hapi. The Wall Turrets on that side were, very fortunately, destroyed. He ran torwards the backdoor, pulled out his Remote Electronics Kit and hacked the door. He carefully went through the corridors, very alert, when he saw an Infiltrator standing there, uncloaked, back torwards Doop, equipping weapons onto his belt.

Doop took out his magnetic blade, turned it onto Slice mode, and stabbed it into the back of the infiltrator, silent as ever. He put away his knife, and saw that he killed: RollingThunder. Moving on, he quietly walked towards the ramp going downwards to the Basement floor, where the Control Console rest. He stood, for a minute, reloading his magazines for his Phoenix rocket launcher, which he previously used on a Comet MAX.

As he holstered his Striker, he heard a door open behind him, and a single VS, "Merco", come out. They made eye-contact, for one fourth of a second. He saw him take out a small pad, with a button on it and some letters engraved into it. He had no idea what it was. He pressed the button, and alarms went off, all over the base.

Doop ran.

Doop · 2004-01-26, 04:05 PM

Part 3: Motorcross

He flicked on Surge, and ran, ran faster than he's ever ran before. He looked back, and saw Merco somewhat far behind, and maybe another soldier behind him, but couldn't tell. He noticed that Merco, fortunately, had no guns with him at the moment. He ran through the backdoor, out to his Basilisk, and rode off to a nearby friendly tower. Luckily it was a Gun Tower.

He went up the stairs, and into a Wall Turret, just incase enemy aircraft were looking for him. Inside the turret, he grabbed his radio.

"Sir, I was almost at the C.C, but this soldier set off alarms all over the base, and I knew I was being chased by at least four of them, I couldn't hack it..."
"It's ok, son," Deathbat said. "We're having light assault on Cetan, drive back over here, you are needed more."

He went back downstairs, still sweating, and got into his Basilisk. He road southeast, alongside the road. He knew, in the back of his head, they sent at least ONE soldier to come looking for him. He knew that the Vanu Sovereignty was one not to just let an enemy get away.

Far into the distance he could see a Reaver flying perpendicular to him with his Zoom implant. He cut off to the left to make it to Cetan by a bigger radius. As he was driving south, he could see a small purple dot, coming torwards him over the desert terrain. Soon enough, he could make out that it was...a Basilisk! A Basilisk with a VS troop on it equipped with a Pulsar and a Lancer. Soon, he saw who it was. The murderer of his own family.

Windstorm.
They both stopped, about fifty meters across, facing eachother, in their Basilisk. They stared at eachother, with the most hatrid in them then they've ever felt before. Windstorm looked at Doop as if he knew him, or knew something he'd done. They both readied their handlebars, and was ready for a well arrived fight.

"You killed Rollingthunder"
"You killed Archaon"
They both said at the same time. Two arch-enemies, much alike, were itching to fight. Their Basilisk's engines were very, very loud, while the sand in the background drifted around.

"Care to dance?"

Doop · 2004-01-27, 10:01 PM

Part 4: You start it, I finish it

They both accelerated, full speed, towards eachother. The sound of wind, the sound of bullets, the sound of death. Windstorm steered to the right around Doop and shot at the rear of the bike. Doop acted fast and swerved to the right, and landed a good amount of shots on him. Windstorm was in the rear, fortunately for him, and kept firing at him. His Basilisk was going down fast.

Doop, in one last twist of hope, did a wheelie and ramped up to Windstorm's Basilisk, and went flying above him, giving him the rear position. He emptied out half a clip of bullets, and finally, Windstorm's bike exploded. Archaon was avenged.

"Hope you saw that, man. Hope you can see where I am now."

"Sorry sir, I had a little something personal to take care of. I'll be there soon," said Doop.
"Hurry up son, they have our tower and are pressing hard through the backdoor. If they push through this backdoor and get to the spawn tubes, it's over," said Quasar.

Doop drove his Basilisk, almost dead, to a boulder south of Qumu. He drew is Phoenix, scoped in, and saw a full Deliverer. It was sparking! He fired a rocket and hoped for the best, guided it directly into the Deliverer and, it killed it, and the explosion killed about five others around it.

"Good job, Doop! But keep going, they're still pushing in," said Deathbat.
"Yessir, thanks."

Doop got back into his Basilisk and drove it to Verica for repairs. He parked it by the repair silo, and sat back as it repaired, after a hard fight. Soon enough, it was done repairing, and he went back.

"Shit, they've really pushed us in. An orbital strike would do a helluva lot right now!," exclaimed Baja.

"I'm on it," said Quasar. He pulled out his Command Uplink Device, pressed a few buttons and they all looked up. They saw a beam of hope, as powerful as the sun, flash down on the courtyard.

"SHIT! Get out! Orbital Strike!" yelled an unknown soldier.
"EVACUATE, NOW!" said another faceless soldier.

But, the beam went off, and killed almost all the enemy soldiers in the courtyard, and only one got away. Doop rushed down with his Gauss, but a sniper beat him to it. He zoomed in to the sattelite platform and saw it was Deathbat.

"Lucky shot!" said Doop.
"Much obliged," said Deathbat.
As he reloaded his Bolt Driver, an infiltrator came up from behind and shot him in the back with an AMP pistol.

"Gah! Deathbat!!" screamed Quasar.
"Incoming enemy aircraft! Phalanx Phoenix division, get into position, you know the drill!" yelled Baja.

Doop, Baja, Useless and about six other soldiers got into their assigned positions on the catwalks.
"Fire on my command."

Close behind, they saw it was four Reavers they were up against. One branched off, and attacked some loose troops in the courtyard.

"FIRE! NOW!," screamed Baja.
They all fired, an army of rockets circling into the Reaver. The pilot kicked on the afterburners, but was too late, the many rockets made critical hits on him, and he went crashing into the ground."

"Keep it up!," yelled Quasar. "Air squad, we need you here, NOW! Three Reavers on approach, and we don't have a lot left to kill them."
"Affirmitive," said Treex into his radio.

"Shit. The TR have Azeban hacked. What the hell are we supposed to do now?" said Doop. "We're being hit hard by the Vanu, and can't afford another enemy to deal with."
"We'll deal with it, but deal with what's happening now," said Quasar.

"Phoenixes, keep firing!" yelled ****. Another armada of missiles went straight into one of the Reavers, strangely hovering still in the air."
"TWO MORE!," yelled Baja.

"Heh," Quasar said into his radio. "This really is a blood bath, today."

Heavygain · 2004-01-27, 11:13 PM

well, the story is alright but i dont like you yourself so

Otherick · 2004-01-28, 05:19 AM

not bad, its a bit wishy washy in my opionon though

ObnoxiousFrog · 2004-01-28, 06:00 AM

I think it's pretty good, but you seem to be using gore as a story element, which might not be the best way to do it.

But I like it overall.

Snipefrag · 2004-01-28, 08:54 AM

Its great because im in it

Doop · 2004-01-28, 10:51 AM

Originally Posted by Heavygain

well, the story is alright but i dont like you yourself so

Ahahahah. Ahah. hahahaha. Ahahahahah. Lol. Suck on a dick.

Obby, where is the gore. oO
Snipefrag, you're not in it anymore, I went NC. :P

Yeah, part 5 coming in today or something.

Kikinchikin · 2004-01-28, 11:49 AM

not bad. perhaps add in some more character development. you kinda gave us a brief thing on doop and archaon, but more depth into the characters is always a good thing.
but so far

Destroyeron · 2004-01-30, 11:13 PM

Originally Posted by ObnoxiousFrog

I think it's pretty good, but you seem to be using gore as a story element, which might not be the best way to do it.

But I like it overall.

I beg to differ :P

Heavygain · 2004-01-30, 11:47 PM

ROFLMAO! you are really startying to be one of the biggest assholes in the game, o and your dick is so small you could finger yourself so as ive said before

p.s. i killed you 16 times today while you were playing your VS char, have you ever heard of staying with ONE empire? on the other post you said you went NC, now your VS! lol

Black · 2004-01-30, 11:50 PM

language plz

Kikinchikin · 2004-01-31, 03:06 AM

why do u hate doop? whatd he do to u?

meh ishould stay out of this anyways, if this is going to be nothing more than a flamefest, then close the topic now as there havent been any new parts since.

Jabberwocky · 2004-01-31, 01:45 PM

What is Doop (the character) trying to accomplish throughout this story? Once you clear up that part of it, it will be a pretty good piece of fiction.
Oh and Heavygain, please take your childish little insecurities out of this thread on your way out.

I really loved this little comment:

Originally Posted by Heavygain

...o and your dick is so small you could finger yourself so as ive said before

Just a pointer, but it's generally more effective if your "insults" actually make sense.

Sigh, some people.