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[1024]

a very rough draft of a song my band and i recorded a month or so back.

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discuss.

[Onizuka]

I really like the first 15 seconds or so

[Smaug]

Yeah I liked the first part, second part was rough, but you guys obviously aren't done with it.

[Hezzy]

Pretty sweet, although I don't really like the quality of the recording. It ruins a potentially great song!

[JetRaiden]

Originally Posted by -Hezzy-

Pretty sweet, although I don't really like the quality of the recording. It ruins a potentially great song!

not really...

[1024]

Originally Posted by 1024

a very rough draft...

[Corrosion]

Get a vocalist.

[1024]

How many times do i have to fucking say...

ITS A ROUGH DRAFT.

Theres no vocals yet. We make the song THEN add the vocals.

ROUGH FUCKING DRAFT.

[I Hate Pants]

That first bit was pretty bitchn'.

[eXoSloth]

Very nice start


A little constructive criticism (I realize the song is a rough draft, don't read this part if you don't want to):

I think it sounds fine without vocals, but some bass would be really nice.

Cutting back on the distortion in some parts would be a good move IMO.

[EineBeBoP]

I love it right up till 15 sec, then that transition pretty much sucks. (I know rought draft, but from what I hear might consider changing it a bit.)

at abotu 50 sec. it sounds sorta like everyone jsut going free-for-all. and again at 1:40

Besides thoes parts, it sounds great. (take my opinions in moderation, I know shit about msuic.)

Edit: this is supposted to be constructive criticism. not trying to pick your song apart (although I do a good job)

Edit2: Sonofabitch! you froze my winamp :-/

[1024]

Originally Posted by eXoSloth

Very nice start: thumbsup:


A little constructive criticism (I realize the song is a rough draft, don't read this part if you don't want to):

I think it sounds fine without vocals, but some bass would be really nice.

Cutting back on the distortion in some parts would be a good move IMO.

We were thinking about having it as instrumental, but i don't think we're headed in that direction with this song in particular, and we are currently looking for a bassist, so,

And the distortion is like doubly distorted just because of the recording, so, again,

Originally Posted by EineBeBoP

I love it right up till 15 sec, then that transition pretty much sucks. (I know rought draft, but from what I hear might consider changing it a bit.)

at abotu 50 sec. it sounds sorta like everyone jsut going free-for-all. and again at 1:40

Besides thoes parts, it sounds great. (take my opinions in moderation, I know shit about msuic.)

Edit: this is supposted to be constructive criticism. not trying to pick your song apart (although I do a good job)

Ya we're planning on working on that transition... And those "free-for-alls" actually sound a lot better live. Again the recording sucks horribly.

Originally Posted by EineBeBoP

Edit2: Sonofabitch! you froze my winamp :-/

pwnt.

[Neon Apocalypse]

i really liked the beginning, but the bongo parts just blew the song, and it needs some reworking on transitions, but otherwise its coming along nicely

[1024]

...bongo parts? :wha:

[BUGGER]

month or so back, am i taking it as you quit it?