PSU Fiction

[eMaGyN]

Ok, so i started writing some stuff this morning...well, ya thats about it for right now

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The desert never ended. It's stretch reached past the setting horizon and over this world's edge. She thought they must have appeared to be a star, falling from the heavens taht collided into flames from hell. She laid on her back, almost ten feet away fromt he burning scrapnel. Her body armor tore in long shreds, leaving her chest to bleed into the frosting air. She shook, half out of immense pain, the other out of the sudden change in the night air.
She lifted her chest column using her head. Her mouth opened, leaivng a bridge of blood to travel across her lips. Screams. The blood from her chest splattered onto her face.
"I must be dying..." her words said with her breath. Opening her eyes, she glanced back to the crash debris. It was lost, the transport, her crew, any item worth value had to be destroyed. The flames caught an ammunition box fueling the fire into an explosion, sending glass and shrapnel acrossed eMaGyN's helpless body.
"I must be dying..." she closed her eyes and clutched into the desert ground as the shards of shrapnel burned into her skin. She screamed uncontrolably, then her screams turned to sobs...sobs into silence.

1:!3 Planet Celestial Time...

The steel, colder than that desert night, eMaGyN felt it pulling the life from her.
"Your number grunt..." the voice came booming, echoing insider her distraught mind. eMaGyN knew that this reply would result in a bullet or a bandaid.
"Your number bitch..." Again, shattering those thin protective walls inside your mind, onlythis time his death call ended with the loading of his hand gun.
"163032692," she whispered through cracked teeth, "I'm 163032692." The man placed the pistol against her temple, "I'M 163032692!!!" She screamed and sobbed, taking the last of her strength to push the gun away. She laid there, crying in that room of white while her blood drippped onto cheap linoleum.
She was losing her hearing and the next things that were said between the pyshicians were muffled. Her eyes gave way and rolled to the right. eMaGyN saw another steel table adjacent to hers. The body was burned on the left side, puss seeped out of raw wounds. She couldn't tell if he was breathing or if his dead body laid twitching.
"H-Ham...ma...." She breathed heavily, letting the red pour from the corner of her mouth. "Ham...ma..."
A gun blast; a flat line sounded to her left... her whole body flinched, pouring more blood, and she lost her strength.

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Ok, thats all i have right now... I might change some of it later
Um...Have a great day


eMa

[StrikeS]

I actually just finished revising mine about 10 minutes ago, hehe it's at

http://www.daoc-darklegacy.com/Strikes-Bio.rtf

Enjoy! (^_^)

[eMaGyN]

The duties of a Medic...

Very good Strike Thanks for sharing!


eMa

[Unregistered]

Is it safe to click the link?

Anylink with "daoc" in the url scares me. what if that unholy game sucks me in and I never comeback??

[Incompetent]

its safe, i was scared before i clicked on it but i didn't think strikes would do anything that cruel.

[Unregistered]

I'm not worried about it bening p0rn, I more concerned it will get me interested in Dark Ages of Camalot!!

[Incompetent]

thats what i meant, i spent a month in that sleep inducing hell and now i fear its screenshots, i get flashbacks to when i drooled on my keyboard

[Unregistered]

*whew*

Glad to know we think alike.

[RandoM]

ema has uber writing skills... i thought it was gona turn into a prono for a minute there

[eMaGyN]

Porno??? When!?!?!

I'm not like that Random

/me glances left, glances right.

ya, I'm not like that.




eMa

[Arglaar]

Then what was that Embedded 70's jazz music for?

[THrONeBeaST]

/me shugs

Dont know

[Manitou]

I almost started a story thread here. But the last time I did it took me nearly a month to finish it!!

Maybe once I do some research on the game I will do a short story on some particular Terran warriors I know... hmmm... I am trying to remember how to write up the bouncing grenade part for Unregistered. Was it off a wall or a tree?

[Hamma]

I think he manages to bounce a nade offf of about anything nearby, rock, wall, tree. You name it.

[Unregistered]

All I know is that those damn grenades always seem to take "a bad bounce".

:hhg: