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Old 2003-06-05, 10:46 PM   [Ignore Me] #1
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the last strike


The seige on the new conglomorate sanctuary had gone extremly well except one minor flaw with nerve gas, and the final assault on the last NC strongholds was under way. and quite possibly the only person bored at that time was starrider, the only soldier certified to fly a "phanasum" a new aircraft with one flaw. he was bored because he was coped up on oshur waiting for the NC sanctuary to fall.

"now quick why cant i get off of this place and go kill some more NC???" starrider asked his outfit leader quickstar. "Because the council wants you here to particeipate in the trials." Quickstar answered. "what good am i here anyway im juat a pilot?" "yes, and im not sure why they want you here either...but i got orders from the council of five and theres no way im going to dis-obey them, and besides the rst of the squad is there, so the battlespracticly won anyway." "yea i know but still i should be there too fighting." starrider said wityh increaseing boredm. "yes i know but if the council has you stay here then it must be for good reason." quick said back to him. "that doesnt stop it from being boring."


30 mins later

"Starrider the council requests your prsance immediately, change into you officer's armor and report to the meeting room imediately." a serious and oer worked looking man in highly poslished armor told him. "Yes SIR!" starrider replyed and went off to change his armor.
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Old 2003-06-06, 01:20 AM   [Ignore Me] #2
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im sorry, but please use punctuation. And plot development. And spelling. And character growth. And 10000 words..... THANKS
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Old 2003-06-06, 03:00 AM   [Ignore Me] #3
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im really sorry but if you dont like the way i write then dont read my writeing. punctuation, and spelling arent that important to me. did you understand it?????? if you did than dont complain i can do worse if you cant then tell me. also i write short chapters sue me, and ive been tought not to devlop the story in the first chaptter...makes it end to quickly.
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War doesn't determine who's right, just who's left - Bertrand Russel

"The absence of war is not peace." - Harry S. Truman

Qui desiderat pacem pr�paret bellum. - He who would desire peace should be prepared for war.

When there is no enemy within, the enemies outside cannot hurt you - Unknown
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Old 2003-06-06, 12:22 PM   [Ignore Me] #4
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Well, ya know i dont know if i dont like it unless i read huh... yeah lol. No i was just being a little sarcastic but please...... make it longer lets see more.
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Old 2003-06-06, 12:36 PM   [Ignore Me] #5
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well i when i post a section of my story thats cause i just spent however long it took thinking it up on the post screen so that makes for shorter chapters.
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War doesn't determine who's right, just who's left - Bertrand Russel

"The absence of war is not peace." - Harry S. Truman

Qui desiderat pacem pr�paret bellum. - He who would desire peace should be prepared for war.

When there is no enemy within, the enemies outside cannot hurt you - Unknown
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Old 2003-06-08, 01:18 AM   [Ignore Me] #6
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just wanted to let anyone who read the first chapter know that the next one wont be up until i get back from camp, which is saterday(ACK) i dont want to go but o well its too late now, on refundable parents money=no backing out.


sry but cant help it.
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War doesn't determine who's right, just who's left - Bertrand Russel

"The absence of war is not peace." - Harry S. Truman

Qui desiderat pacem pr�paret bellum. - He who would desire peace should be prepared for war.

When there is no enemy within, the enemies outside cannot hurt you - Unknown
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Old 2003-06-22, 07:02 PM   [Ignore Me] #7
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what is it??? it says ppage expired.
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