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Old 2003-11-02, 05:24 PM   [Ignore Me] #46
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Old 2003-11-04, 10:33 PM   [Ignore Me] #47
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Chapter 15: Lessons - New Conglomerate Sanctuary Test Area

Jack leaned back in the chair with a plate over the arms. The pieces of a gauss rifle where spewn about the tray. The Lieutenant was behind him chin on his shoulder lookin down at what he was doing. He proceded to diassemble the gun and point out the parts. "And the last thing to do is disconnect the battery from the rail. Then the gun is fully disassembled. Now you try taking yours apart."

"Ok. Looks easy enough." She proclaimed. She walked back behind Jack and sat down in a similar chair. Swinging the large metal plate down to the arm rest she started taking the screws out for the gun and placing them in the indentations on the plate. Jack took the plate off of his and set it down on the ground. Pushing his chair to get closer he watched as she took the gun apart... very slowly. About an hour later she finished. "Ok Jack!" She said with a big smile. "Im finished.... Jack?" She turned her head and found Jacks right next to her. He had fallen asleep long ago and his head was resting up against the side of his chair. She simply backhanded him across the chest. "Wake up you jerk!" Jack snaped awake after taking the hit and gasped hard.

"What the hell did you do that for!?"

"Your supposed to be teaching me, not getting a nap."

"Sorry, just taking you a little while." He checked his watch. "But hey your did it in half the time of almost all other first timers. You sure youve never done this before?"

"Nope I havnt."

"Ok now to put it back together." Jack started placing hte parts back on the gun in the opposite order that he had taken it appart. He occasionaly looked over at Jen who was watching his everymove. It took him about ten minutes to do so. Once again he disloged the gun tray from his seat and reclined back as Jen went to work. "I promise I wont go to sleep this time."

"Good, I think I might need some help."

"Dont worry, your doing it fine." He watched as her small hands glided over the tray looking for a part or particular screw. Everytime he thought he had to call out the location of something she would find it just before he said anything. She only took 30 minutes to do this, a remarkable time for anyone who had never done this before he thought to himself.

"Okay!!!! Im done!" She sang out to him.

"Good work. Now for the hard part. Time to teach you how to shoot." By this time the firing range was empty. It was past 2 PM so everyone had left. "At least no one is here to laugh."

"Whats that supposed to mean? Just because Im a woman does not mean I cant shoot."

"Jen, you ever shot a gun before?"

"Um no. But still just because Im a girl does not mean im a bad shot or something."

"I didnt say that."

"You wanted to."

"No I didnt."

"Lets just try it." She started to walk up to the first firing port. Jack followed close behind her with a rifle and a pistol. He walked up to the firing port with her and pressed a few buttons.

"Ok see that button on the floor?" He pointed at a small red switch on the center left of the floor." As soon as you step on that button the drill will comence. You have one target at twentyfive yards that will not move. Nice easy target. Letting your foot off the button will stop the drill and turn the power in your gun to off. Any moving targets out there will also stop and your accuracy will be calculated."

"This all seems simple enough. Lets try it." She took the Gauss Rifle from him stepped up to the port and was about to step on the button.

"Stop."

"What?"

"You shoot like and your going to fall on your ass, hehe."

"Well then how should I do it?"

"Like this." He put his hands on her back and stomach and turned her 90 degrees . Her torso was now facing him. He squated down and moved her feet apart a bit and set them parallel to her body. The last thing he did was grab the barel and the stock of her rifle and placed it on her shoulder.

"Um... ok." She said after getting her self situated in the new position. She looked down the sight rail and pulled the trigger once. The barrel erupted with a spit of fire as the bullet was hyper accelerated to 6 times the speed of sound. She started to fall back. She wasnt ready for the recoil. Jack was standing right behind her and caught her before she fell to the ground.

"You ok?" He asked her nicly.

"Yes, thanks though."

"Ok lets try this." He stood her back up and took the rifle from her. She walked back up the the fireing postion and took the stance he had showed her. She got a slight suprise when he came up behind her though and handed her the rifle. She put the rifle in her shoulder as he reached for it himself. He wraped his arm around her and grabed the gun holding it firm. Standing behind and to the left slightly he put his cheek directly against hers. She could feel the stubble on his cheek as he started to talk again. "Ok, line up the target and hold your breath. Now slowly squeeze the trigger." The rifle kicked in reponce to the trigger pull but this time the recoil was alot less from him holding the rifle firmly. The targets center area exploded and parts scattered about the field. She pulled the trigger a few more times. Each time the recoil of the gun got harder and harder. Eventualy she realised that Jack was no longer holding the gun. He was just holding her.
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Old 2003-11-04, 11:02 PM   [Ignore Me] #48
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shooting fun! hmm it wasent that long peace ;P lol good stuff though <3 jennyboo
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Old 2003-11-05, 12:46 PM   [Ignore Me] #49
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Old 2003-11-05, 10:30 PM   [Ignore Me] #50
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Chapter 16: Friends, Beer, and A Girl

"Um Jack?" Jen wispered to him. "Jack?"

"Huh?" Jack opened his eyes for a second. He still had his arms wraped around Jen, he hadnt really noticed it.

"Im out of ammo, I need to get another clip, your going to HAVE to let go of me sometimes." She wispered with a giggle.

"Uh, yea ok. Im sorry abo..."

"Jack dont worry. Your only human after all."

"Yea... human." He suddenly came out of his trance and let go of her. She walked over and jammed another clip into the magazine of the rifle. Jack walked up to the console and looked at the results. The computer monitor read *1st shot: miss; 5 inches left, 2 inches high. 2nd shot: miss; 2 inches left, 1/2 inch high. 3rd shot: hit. 4th shot: hit. 5th shot: hit....* it continued on till the 20th shot. In total 16 hits and 4 misses. "Pretty impressive for a first time. Um lets start this one at 100 yards." He pressed a few buttons and a few targets appeared on a virtual hill 100 yards away.

"Ok lets give it a shot. They look kinda far though."

"Dont worry about it youll get it." He said. She raised the rifle to her shoulder and pumped off a shot that visibly missed the target by about 2 feet. She adjusted and fired again and again and again. The fifth round hit the target and it shattered....

Several Hours Later


Jack was sitting back behind Jen watching her shoot at a few moving targets down range. She was quickly becoming an excelent shot. They had been there for hours and it was now 8 o'clock. She emptied her magazine walked over and slumped into her own chair.

"Well whats next?" She asked him with a sigh.

"Nothing."

"Huh?"

"Your done. You are a certified marks-woman. And a damn good one at that."

"Are you serious Jack?"

"No Im joking and we acctualy have to spend the night here." He said with a slight smile.

"Ha! Shut up!" She threw a bullet casing that was laying on the table at him.

"Come on lets get out of here." He stood up and started to walk away.

"Where you goin now?" She stood up.

"Where do you think?" He yelled back.

"Your going to sleep right."

"No! I still have a day before the mission. Im getting drunk!"

"Mind if I tag along?" This question made Jack turn and look and find that she was right behind him. He looked at him oddly. "You... want to go get drunk with... me?"

"I really dont drink but Id rather stay with you for a little while longer." Jack still looked at her oddly as he walked out the door of the firing range and jumped into a enforcer jeep. She got in the passanger seat and he gunned it for the bar in the captial of the New Conglomerate, The City of Liberation.

The City of Liberation


The city reminded Jack of the place where he was raised back on earth twenty years before. The place was known as New York. A huge metropolis bustling with air cars, space liners, gigantic terran space cruisers, and enormous biuldings. This place had the large biuldings air craft and traffic but it was missing the space port that New York had. The northern part of the city was a giagantic military base, the south side was a gigantic party zone, the east side was a government center, and to the west was the housing. Jack was driving into the city on the road to the south end. He noticed a large sign and parked the tough little jeep. He jumped out and she followed. Walking into the Cloud Nine bar Jack was greeted by serveral people, many of which inquired to him about his guest. A gigantic man with hands covered in grease and oil patted Jack on the back.

"Jack my friend! We herd you had been shot down! What has happened to cause such rumors?" The obviously drunk man billowed.

"Mechanical failure Bruno. Caught me off guard. Birds all shot up back on Cyssor. And no Bruno you are not going to fix it."

"How did you escape capture? The entire southern section of Cyssor is crawling with those bastard Terrans."

"I didnt. Worst part is it was the friggen Vanu who caught me!"

"The Vanu Peace!? How!? Huh? How? How did you get away?" An excitable young boy came up. Jack sat down at the bar stand and signaled Jen to sit down next to him. The kid jumped up and sat down on the bar stand with a grin. Jack frowned for a second though.

"You mean no one knows what happened?" They all looked at eachother.

"All we know about the Vanu right now is that their sanctuary was blasted by a platoon of Prowlers a few days ago." The big mechanic Bruno responded. Jack looked at Jen with a puzzled look.

"Yea well I escaped in the confusion and made it back to Cyssor in one piece. Enough talk tho guys, I came here for a few drinks." Jack hammered the bar stand with his fist and a bar tender appeared.

"Hiya Jack! Long time no see! What do you want tonight."

"Got a day off tomarrow Sean, give me something strong and her something light."

"Thats ok I dont drink Jen responded."

"Um ok whatever." The bar keep responded. He poured some red liquid into a glass and gave it to Jack as it started to foam over. The rest of the night went along like anyother night in a bar. Occasionaly a few of Jacks friends would recognize him and talk for a while. Eventualy everyone in the bar herd Jack's story and was introduced to Jen who sat in awe of Jack's popularity. At about midnight Jen looked at Jack and decided three of the relativly strong looking beers was enough. He was getting a little woosy but nothing too serious. She grabed him by the arm and started to walk out. Jack followed with no real resistance.

"See ya round Jack." The entire bar drunkenly yelled as he walked out the door. "Have fun man." Bruno said with a smirk as Jack went by. He didnt really know what Burno ment but it didnt matter.

Outside Jack climbed into the driver seat bulked in and waited for Jen. "Home." He said into the mike. The enforcer started to drive itself to the west side of the city and ten minutes later arrived at a medium sized biulding. The jeep parked itself and Jack got out. Jen helped him up the steps and went inside. Jack walked into the first door on the right which was dark inside and sat down a nice sized bed. Jen stood in the door, her outline only visible to him from the dim light in the kitchen. She started walking into the room and pressed the button to shut the door behind her.

"Nope...." Jack said, "Didnt see one that coming..."
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Old 2003-11-05, 11:09 PM   [Ignore Me] #51
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Damn you peace you had to stop there ... u'd better write damn early tommorrow... we all want some lub to go on ..great stuff still alittle short .. heeh (need more time for writing i think) <3 good stuff i'm on the edge of me bed...umm seat *grins evil grin* lol <3 Jennyboo
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Old 2003-11-06, 11:19 PM   [Ignore Me] #52
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Keep it up!
"Nope...." Jack said, "Didnt see one that coming..."
Hahahaha...
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Old 2003-11-08, 08:09 PM   [Ignore Me] #53
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Chapter 17: Tears in a Dream

Jack felt the bed bend down to his left as Jen sat down next to him. She moved over closer to him, wraped her arms around his arm, and leaned her head on his shoulder. They sat there staring into the darkness. Jen started to lay back after awhile and she pulled Jack along with her. She rolled over onto him and put her ear on his chest. He started to run his fingers through her long hair.

"Jack.... I can hear your heart beating."

"Thats nice."

"Something wrong?"

"No, just a little quick, don't you think?"

"Isnt this what you wanted?"

"No, its not. I wasnt even expecting this." Jen had rolled over by this time and was looking at him. He was looking down at her. He continued to run his fingers through her hair. He stared into her eyes for a while and finally leaned down and kissed her on the forehead. Jenny sat up, unbuttoned her blouse, slid it down her arms, and tossed it to the side. Jack reached around her and fiddled with he bra strap. A few seconds later it poped off. Jen in turn worked Jack's shirt off. Jen laid down on him again pressing her breasts into his chest. Jack started working her back with his big hands. Jen laid her head between his head and his shoulder and he sucked on her earlobe. He continued to massage her for a few minutes untill his hands started to become sore. He rolled her over on her back and slid down the bed to start kissing her belly. It didnt take him long to start moving up her body and came to her perfectly shaped breasts. He started to suck on one of her nipples and pinched the other softly. She moaned softly and ran her fingeres through his hair. A few minutes later Jack stoped this and rolled over on his back. Jen turned on her side and leaned up against him.

"Whats wrong Jack?"

"Nothing. I just dont want to go all out. Not tonight." Jen smiled at him and laid her head on his arm and slung her arm over his chest. Jack pulled her closer and pulled the covers over them. Soon she was fast asleep. Jack really couldnt sleep though. He finally started thinking about his dream about the devestation of Cyssor. His mind recalled perfectly every face in the dream. Each perfectly clear. As he lay there he recalled how they all died, one by one. Each in the same way, over and over and over. Then he came to a face that he did not remember. It was a female that was obvious to him, but no visible proof in his memorys told him this. Her face was blured out, he couldnt see it at all. There was only one distinct feature that he could recall and "see". Tears were streaming down her face.
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Old 2003-11-08, 10:00 PM   [Ignore Me] #54
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.. i thought it was good peace .... but damn i though for sure they were going to go at it like fat men on brownies lol heheh time will tell if they do . And to your side not yes it is a part of life so all the power to ya ..hehe keep writing i'm sure as hell going to keep reading <3 Jennyboo
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Old 2003-11-08, 11:24 PM   [Ignore Me] #55
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arg I just noticed, Chapter 16, the last line is supposed to read

"Nope...." Jack said, "Didnt see that one coming..."
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Old 2003-11-09, 01:41 PM   [Ignore Me] #56
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d00d thats awesome!

Cant wait for you to write more!
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Old 2003-11-09, 10:17 PM   [Ignore Me] #57
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Old 2003-11-10, 07:08 PM   [Ignore Me] #58
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hmmm... give us a little taste then stop huh ? :P ok we'll just have to wait <3 jennyboo
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Old 2003-11-10, 10:49 PM   [Ignore Me] #59
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Old 2003-11-11, 06:41 PM   [Ignore Me] #60
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Damn edit limit ran out just as I hit the post button so I lost all the work I did on it. Gotta redo it, I think ill just rewrite the chapter and have Vash del it.
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