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Old 2004-09-09, 10:57 PM   [Ignore Me] #121
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Old 2004-10-10, 07:48 PM   [Ignore Me] #122
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Sometime in the next week will be an update.
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Old 2004-10-10, 10:34 PM   [Ignore Me] #123
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Old 2004-10-14, 11:00 PM   [Ignore Me] #124
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ok kool i can wait
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Old 2004-10-14, 11:06 PM   [Ignore Me] #125
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shhh stfu say no u cant wait sheesh lol
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Old 2004-10-16, 06:03 PM   [Ignore Me] #126
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lol i cant wait!!!!! give it to me nowwwww
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Old 2004-10-21, 12:22 AM   [Ignore Me] #127
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Chapter 27: The Barneys Get A Suprise

The door to the medical lab slid open and Jack steped into the newly set up command center. Hamma, Manitou, Sentrosi, and Marsman were all inside. The wall was lined with medical supplies, cabinets, lockers and off in one corner was the body of a dead vanu infantry man. Sentrosi looked up as Jack entered the room.

"What up Peace?"

"Gotta ask you something Sent."

"Whats that?"

"How did Lunar survive? I thought I watched him die."

Sentrosi paused for a second and looked over at Hamma who shook his head. He then looked at Manitou who also shook his head no.

"Cant say Peace. Not yet anyways."

"What do you mean you cant say!? I WATCH HIM DIE!"

"Dont worry man you will find out in good time."

"Mani, Sent you guys have to tell me whats...."

The loud burst of a cycler was heard. A few secnds later a grenade exploded. Then the sound of the Dual Cycler Max's rotary guns spining up.

"Shit." Sent whispered to him self. "Peace get out there and help them!"

"Right."

Jack stepped back through the door and walked down the hall. The door into the main room slid open and a rain of plasma bolts found their way to the wall next to Jack. He leaned out and saw the main door wide open. Several vanu were running around outside behind some barricades, and the side door to the main room was also open, the corps of three vanu were laying near, the door continuly tried to close but one of the dead had his head caught in it and it reopened every time. The CDL platoon was behind its erected barricades guns ready. He ran out the door into the main room behind the barricade that Black was standing behind. He held in his hand a plasma grenade. Pressing the button on the top of the grenade he began to count.

"One. Two. Three." With a great heave he through the grenade out the door and it exploded showering a Vanu trooper hiding behind the main door frame with plasma. The soldier fell and rolled around with the searing hot plasma burning away at him. Jack looked at orange.

"Orange do it." He yelled. Orange nodded pointed his cycler at the screaming vanu and let a burst finish him off. Suddenly the sporatic fire that was coming into the door turned into a raging tourent. Jack could hear Sent talking to Thronebeast on the coms system.

"How many of them are there TB?"

"Probably about 60 - 70 troops outside, another 15 or 20 on the stair well."

"Can you hold them?" Jack watched TB look around the room. Sieldan let fly wtih a plasma grenade from his thumper and Blackdrop fired a burst out the door from his MCG . Two more Vanu died. Then the DC maxs finaly let go. A small shield mounted on the front of their bunkers lowered down and they fired into the doorway franticly. A few screams could be heard outside.

"Yea no problem boss." TB radioed. "Ok guys! Lets give it to them!"

In the next few minutes an insanly large firefight erupted in the main room and just outside the courtyard. With KaozReign, EarlyDawn, Red Eyes, and Strygun setting charges on the cealing it was all the dragonwolves could do to keep the enemy at bay. But slowly they started to try and push in.

Jack saw a vanu trooper make a break for the door and fired a shot from his sweeper. It caught the man in the left arm and he spun around as a burst from Duffman's Cycler caught him in the face. Two more infantry charged into the room. Lunar fired off his rocklet gun and blew them away. Orange fired burst after burst from his cycler out the door. Derfud spewed ammo out with his MCG. The Maxs continued to pour fired onto targets outside and Thronebeast and Kaikou poured thumper grenades behind their lines. Then the door into the stairwell stoped trying to close. Jack saw three infantry try to rush in. He took aim and fired a shot removing the lead man's head. Lunar fired another rocklet that missed and went through the door. Another was lodged into the third mans torso and he droped to the ground with a bad rocket charge in his chest. The second man simply ran into the room and to the main door where his friends promptly cut him down.

Lasher and thumper fire started pouring in now. The enemy outside were getting concentrated. That when Jack looked over at Chaos lord. He had a gigantic silver shiny thing on his back. He also noted that Cyrus also had an identical silver thing.
At that very instant both of the Rexo clad warriors pulled them off and pushed a glowing button on the bottom. They braced their feet and the silver looking objects erupted shooting a ball of somthing out the door. The sound of arching electricity could be heard and little lightning bolts could be seen reaching across the ground. Another volly. Suddenly all the fire stoped. The thud of a few bodies was heard.

"The hell was that!?" Jack cried out.

"Malstroms! Perfect for clearing a bunch of people close together." Cyrus explained

"Well aint that a bitch?" Jack exclaimed.

"Dont celebrate just yet!" ChaosLord cried out.

5 MAX armors burst through the door firing their lasers. Jack instantly took a hit in the left arm and he felt it go numb. Orange was also hit but in the leg. He crumpled to the ground. One of the DC maxs suddenly ran out of ammo. Jack looked around and saw half of the CDL was acctualy incipacitated in the fire fight. He hadent noticed but 2 infantry were behind their lines. Both were dead... both had lasher heavy assault weapons. They had breached the line while he was in the med lab. Now the platoon was starting to fail against the MAXs. To top it off the infantry outside suddenly reappeard. Cyrus took two bolts to the left shoulder and crumpled... probably dead. A grenade landed by chaos lord and blew him over the battlements. A volly of pulsar fire found his landing spot before he did.

"Sent we are failing... theres too many the just keep..." TB's radio was shot out of his hand.

Time started skipping for Jack. He looked around as those around him fell. Suddenly Lunar was by him. He looked right at Jack and screamed.

"LETS FALL BACK TO THE MED LAB!"

"WE HAVE TO STAY HERE! THEY HAVE TO SET THE CE!!!"

"NO WE HAVE TO...." Lunar couldnt finish. A lasher orb flew by him and lashed at his neck. He was instantly scorched and could no longer talk. Another bolt grazed Jack's left leg. Time slowed down even further.

Then. It stoped. All that he could feel was the pain. He focused on it. Closing his eyes he saw him self hurtling through space again. And then... Earth.

Jack's eyes flashed open. Burning red. He jumped back to the rear wall and kicked off it flying towards the VS MAXs at blistering speed. Extending his right hand he tore the arm off the first reached in and tore the limb from the controls. Rolling over on his back in mid air he found himself behind all the MAXs about to pass through the main door. He fired 5 seprate energy bolts and they all struck each MAX in their weak point, the back of the head. All fell silent immediatly.

Jack skidded to a stop outside in the court yard. All of the Vanu troopers turned and looked at him. Flexing his arm the MAX armor weapon shattered. He pulled out his Chainblade and fell upon the troops. Dashing between them at a mindblistering speed. Cutting them all to pieces. The knife stoped working after he slaughtered the 12th trooper. Its battery was dead. The next man in line tried to block what was coming but it was too fast. Jack grabed his skull by the face and simply ripped it off. He through a punch at the next man and it broke all of his ribs causing him to vomit massive amounts of blood. The next man he grabbed by the arm and flung him over his should like a rag doll onto a group of of troops. The massive speed the man travelled at crushed all 4 of them. A glimer caught Jack's eye. Underneath one of the catwalks. He rushed towards it. Several pulsar bolts trailing 5 feet behind him, the Vanu infantry couldnt lead him properly. He popped through a bubble and found three vanu infantry standing next to a strange large vehicle. It had a tube in the middle and an inventory station on the back. Jack looked at it as he approached it at high speed and wondered what it was.

A milisecond later he smashed through it and the large vehicle exploded killed 5 more vanu. The rest looked at Jack and ran. He chased two of them and killed them both. Suddenly it was over and Jack looked around. He felt the urge to kill more. He ran back towards the facilty when it all ended. It felt like a hangover after a long night of drinking back at the bar.......... he thought to him self.

"Wait what bar?" He asked aloud. And time was back to normal. Jack was back to being himself. He looked around at the debris and body filled courtyard and slowly walked back inside the biulding. Inside most of the dragonwolves had been revived using Nanites from the Advanced medical terminal in the back. He looked at all of them who all looked back at him. "What happened?" He asked them.

"Uh.... you happened Peace." Lunar said quietly.

"What do you mean?"

"Dude. Look at your hands."

Jack looked down at his hands. His armor was cracked in about 50 diffrent places and his hands were the exact same crimson red as the rest of his uniform. Except this red was blood.

2 minutes later the cealing of the main room was blown and the generator above destroyed. The Galaxies landed a few moments later and all of CDL climed on. They took off as the advanced elements of the Terran Republic armored divisions arived.

The entire Platoon was still focused on Jack. All of them turned away when hel looked up.

"What the hell am I?" Jack asked himself.
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Old 2004-10-21, 12:25 AM   [Ignore Me] #128
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Hope your fuckin happy! :-P
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Old 2004-10-21, 12:34 AM   [Ignore Me] #129
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Old 2004-10-21, 07:42 AM   [Ignore Me] #130
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w00t indeed and i am fucking happy!
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Old 2004-10-21, 12:12 PM   [Ignore Me] #131
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Keep it up peace
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Old 2004-10-22, 12:04 AM   [Ignore Me] #132
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HOLY SHIT!!!! that was amazin!!!!! write more!
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Old 2004-10-22, 12:39 PM   [Ignore Me] #133
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More is on the way within the week. I am in an angry mood. I.E. I feel like writing.
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Old 2004-10-23, 01:48 AM   [Ignore Me] #134
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niiiiiiice very good work im happy 2 lol
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Old 2004-10-24, 01:51 AM   [Ignore Me] #135
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Note: The chapter named "The Barneys Get a Suprize" is acctualy chapter 30. Where the hell is vash when I need him? I need that edited. Also prepair for a major reworking of the story, had a few changes in my clan so I need to change the story to go with it.
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