i reread this and fixed several typos and rearraged some of the wording. ironic thing is, i couldnt think of a name :\
Chapter 1
Noise. Something familiar..it kept getting louder. Gunfire...explosions...shouting... his vision was coming back. He couldn't make it out very well. It looked like glass...then it came to him. A Spawn Tube. He was alive, once more. All his memories, dreams, thoughts he had in the past and at that very moment he had entered his DNA into the Respawning Matrix suddenly rushed at him, causing a nasty headache. The door opened, and he fell out. All around people were running back and forth. Then he remembered. He had died. The thought haunted him. Suddenly he remembered who he was..Buck. Buck Williams. He had respawned in a tower near Verica. He slowley got up, feeling drousy, he stumbled over to an Equipment Terminal. There was so much gunfire above, and he nearley fell down when a Vangaurd's shell hit somewhere very near the tower. He suited up in a Quasar MAX Suit and headed upstairs. His Squad Leader, whom he could not remember the name of, shouted out the coordinates of an enemy AMS somewhere in the woods. "Sir?" He asked through his intercom. "Buck, glad your back. I'm Cameron Diguarez, your Squad Leader." It was slowley coming back to him. He was heading up the stairs and reached the door, when suddenly 3 NC Soldiers flew in and opened fire, forcing Buck to do the same. He opened fire at one of them, cutting up his Reinforced ExoSuit exposing his light shirt and the extremley burned skin that resulted from the Quasar's Plasma Cannon. He fell down, gripping his chest, and 4 other Vanu rushed up to help battle the other 2 New Conglomerate footsoldiers. A huge explosion knocked him down, his onboard computer stating his armor was at a critical level. He tried to get back up, but could not do anything but go into a fetal position due to the MAX's heavy armor. Obviously, a MAX was not meant to lie down. More gunfire, shouting and groaning of soldiers hitting the ground in a hidious smacking sound. Suddenly, he started to rise as about 5 Vanu started to lift him upright. As soon as he could, he regained control of his Leg Units and started downstairs. He found out he had been hit by a Decimator Rocket Launcher, and searched for an Engineer. Unfortunatley, all he found were 2 Vanu just barley respawning, which one was cowering in the corner, probabley frightened by the huge MAX Suit he was in. He ignored them and headed to an Equipment Terminal, and selected Agile armor with his favorite gun: the Pulsar. On his right holster was a REK, or, Remote Electronics Kit. Used for hacking, it is a must-have for any reasonable footsoldier. On his left, he had packed a Medical Unit. He turned around to see 2 more Vanu respawn, and headed upstairs as the battle continued around the tower. He finally got outside, only to duck for cover behind a barricade. It looked like the Vanu were being pushed back. He got up and ran as fast as he could, narrowley missing a few Gauss rounds. He pulled out his Pulsar and opened fire on some NC snipers on top of the base's wall, who in turn ducked. Then he heard the familiar voice of his Squad Leader on his intercom, Cameron. "We need support at the Main Gate as soon as possible!" he shouted, his voice sounding distorted due to the background fire. The Main Gate was on the South wall, just around 50 meters from his position. He started running North East into the trees, avoiding as much fire as he could.
comments? should i continue or what? i should put this in paragraphs, i know, but i didnt think of that till after and im too lazy to go over it Again and add indentations
2004-01-31, 09:42 PM
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