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Old 2003-12-24, 01:29 AM   [Ignore Me] #1
Heavygain
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The fall of the terran republic


The rain was trampling down on Girru, Hamma and his squad was stationed here due to Intel that the New Conglomerate was going to strike. They had been there for 3 days when an enemy vanguard rolled into the SOI. �Enemy vanguard at NE tower!� shouted Hyncharas. From the top of the air tower he pulled out a striker, the rain made a slight pinging noise on the hollow metal, he aimed at the vanguard, not long after a very high pitch beep, he pulled the trigger. The rocket shot out of the barrel and plummeted down at the tank, he fired 4 more times to empty the clip. �Damn armor� muttered Hycharas. Immediately he removed the clip and put in another one. He couldn�t figure out why it was just sitting there, he hadn�t seen anyone get out of it, and the barrel hadn�t even moved yet. He unloaded another clip into it, on the last shot it went up in a beautiful flame, not long after and an ear-blowing explosion took place. �Got it,� He shouted over the radio. �Great, now scout the area for more enemies, I don�t think they would send just a lone vanguard� said Hamma over the radio. �Lemme just get a sniper rif�. �Hyncharas? Hycharas come in� no response. �Heavygain! Go to the northeast tower and check out what�s going on� �Yes sir!� bellowed Heavygain over the radio. Heavygain holstered his sweeper shotgun and ran northeast. He saw the pile of smoldering metal that used to be a vanguard in front of the tower. He checked for a body and found one, it was severely burned and part of the front armor of the vanguard had pierced straight through his chest. Seconds later he heard cycler shots. He dashed to the tower door and removed his shotgun from its holster, strafing across the hallway looking for the enemy he ran up the stairs. He ran up all of the stair sets until he reached the top, then he went through the door to the balcony and saw what used to be Hyncharas, in an ocean of blood coming through the head. A knife and been stabbed through the right temple and it was still there. �Hamma, Hynch is dead,� He reported over the radio �HOW??� �There is a knife through his right temple.� He explained ��.� Was the only response he got.



Tell me if u guys like it, its gonna be a hella long story and i need charactor names vitaly from the NC and ill take some from the TR. So far ive only found a bunch od random NC and i took some of the guys i kno and hate so TELL ME IF U WANNA BE IN THE STORY, if u dont, then say u dont in your post otherwise i might just use u anyway

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Old 2003-12-24, 08:22 AM   [Ignore Me] #2
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not bad realy, i dont mind being in it if u want a Vanu reaver pilot, Otherick is the name reaver piloting in my game :P
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Old 2003-12-24, 06:50 PM   [Ignore Me] #3
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Well done job, all in all. Add some grammar, such as breaking up the text, and you're golden.
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Old 2003-12-24, 08:28 PM   [Ignore Me] #4
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Cool. Throw in RedZephyr if you like. NC sniper, pheonix, medic.
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Old 2003-12-26, 07:49 PM   [Ignore Me] #5
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Me too, the guy in my profile, Oppression, not my forum name...if you've got a use for me, that is. NC, infil, Medium Assault, Adv. Hack, and Harasser.
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Old 2003-12-26, 08:13 PM   [Ignore Me] #6
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Old 2003-12-26, 09:34 PM   [Ignore Me] #7
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When can we expect the next installment?
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Old 2003-12-26, 10:06 PM   [Ignore Me] #8
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GJ heavy jus make sure you add me to TR -CDL-
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Old 2003-12-27, 01:22 AM   [Ignore Me] #9
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I'll get the next chapter on here sometime tommorow hopefully. but sleep is goood.....
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Old 2003-12-27, 02:29 AM   [Ignore Me] #10
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heck ya ill be in ur story im NC
my names are
xmodum:HA,MA,ReXo,Sniping,SA
xmodum2:Infillsuit,adv.hacking,scattercannonMAX
toquick4u:sniping(my bros char, he just made him and he LOVES to be a sniper, any game we play hes the sniper )

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Old 2003-12-27, 01:24 PM   [Ignore Me] #11
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Ooo, ooo, ooo, I wanna be in your story!!!
My characters are:
TheN00b
BR12
ReXo
MA
SA
HA
Hacking

And

N00bInf
BR4
Inf Suit
Hacking
Adv Hacking
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Old 2003-12-27, 01:36 PM   [Ignore Me] #12
Heavygain
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Chapter 2: Make them suffer first

Heavygain heard a door open from the top balcony of the watchtower. It was not far but not close either he immediately knew it was the lower balcony. He pulled out his shotgun and double-checked to see that it was loaded then dashed down the stairs. The entire tower echoed with the sound of rain pinging off of it, he had no time to switch to his chain gun but he knew it only could be an agile armor at the most so he wasn�t to worried. Once he reached the lower balcony he sweeped the area, nothing then he looked closer and saw the rain pinging off of nothing. He unloaded his entire shotgun clip into his legs just to make him suffer it seemed like the blood shed would never end, the man screamed in pain begging for mercy �You are a disgrace to the soldier, you are a disgrace to a five year old, you are now in the hands of the Terran Republic and I will see to it that you are executed as soon as possible. After Tying him up he radioed into Hamma �I got him, I�m keeping him prisoner and seeing to it that he gets the most painful execution the Terran Republic will permit.� �Good job Heavy, bring him back to base and we will find out his identity� �No need, its Sgswift I don�t understand why they would send him to secure a tower but they might have another plan in mind� Heavygain threw SG over his back and ran down to the basement and switched his weapons, he got rid of his shotgun and replaced it with a chaingun. Then he turned around to see Blackdrop�s body glued to the wall with his insides. �YOU SON OF A BITCH!! IM KILLING YOU RIGHT NOW!� Heavygain got a REK from the equipment term and messed up Sgswift�s matrixing. Then got a repeater and shot him in the groin once, immediately SG shriveled up in pain, Heavygain kicked him in the face breaking his nose. Then he shot him in the stomach once and let him bleed, watching him with a smile from the corner of the room. When SG had at last went out cold, Heavygain tied his body to a locker and used him as target practice. The first shot went pierced straight through his right arm and ricochet off the back of the locker and tore through his the side of his neck. After an hour of pleasure for Heavygain, he brought the tattered body to hamma, he was barely alive. Hamma looked at Heavygain with apprehensive eyes �What? he killed Blackdrop�


Not the most action packed chapter im writting but i do hate SG and I do like tortureing people

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Old 2003-12-27, 02:04 PM   [Ignore Me] #13
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Ouch...You shot a guy in the balls? Thats just unfair.
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Old 2003-12-27, 02:16 PM   [Ignore Me] #14
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Originally Posted by Heavygain
Not the most action packed chapter im writting but i do hate SG and I do like tortureing people
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Old 2003-12-27, 02:21 PM   [Ignore Me] #15
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SturmGrenadier or Serious Gamers?

Neither is very fearsome in my book, as everyone dies equally at the business end of a Jackhammer (how fun is that, owning an NC with his own surge/agile/Jackasshammer combo?)
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