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Old 2004-05-11, 06:06 PM   [Ignore Me] #1
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a very rough draft of a song my band and i recorded a month or so back.

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Old 2004-05-11, 06:14 PM   [Ignore Me] #2
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I really like the first 15 seconds or so
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Old 2004-05-11, 06:15 PM   [Ignore Me] #3
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Yeah I liked the first part, second part was rough, but you guys obviously aren't done with it.
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Old 2004-05-11, 06:24 PM   [Ignore Me] #4
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Pretty sweet, although I don't really like the quality of the recording. It ruins a potentially great song!
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Old 2004-05-11, 06:26 PM   [Ignore Me] #5
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Originally Posted by -Hezzy-
Pretty sweet, although I don't really like the quality of the recording. It ruins a potentially great song!
not really...
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Old 2004-05-11, 06:31 PM   [Ignore Me] #6
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Originally Posted by 1024
a very rough draft...
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Old 2004-05-11, 06:32 PM   [Ignore Me] #7
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Get a vocalist.
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Old 2004-05-11, 06:38 PM   [Ignore Me] #8
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How many times do i have to fucking say...

ITS A ROUGH DRAFT.

Theres no vocals yet. We make the song THEN add the vocals.

ROUGH FUCKING DRAFT.
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Old 2004-05-11, 06:39 PM   [Ignore Me] #9
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That first bit was pretty bitchn'.
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Old 2004-05-11, 06:42 PM   [Ignore Me] #10
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Very nice start


A little constructive criticism (I realize the song is a rough draft, don't read this part if you don't want to):

I think it sounds fine without vocals, but some bass would be really nice.

Cutting back on the distortion in some parts would be a good move IMO.
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Old 2004-05-11, 06:43 PM   [Ignore Me] #11
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I love it right up till 15 sec, then that transition pretty much sucks. (I know rought draft, but from what I hear might consider changing it a bit.)

at abotu 50 sec. it sounds sorta like everyone jsut going free-for-all. and again at 1:40

Besides thoes parts, it sounds great. (take my opinions in moderation, I know shit about msuic.)

Edit: this is supposted to be constructive criticism. not trying to pick your song apart (although I do a good job)

Edit2: Sonofabitch! you froze my winamp :-/
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Old 2004-05-11, 06:49 PM   [Ignore Me] #12
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Originally Posted by eXoSloth
Very nice start: thumbsup:


A little constructive criticism (I realize the song is a rough draft, don't read this part if you don't want to):

I think it sounds fine without vocals, but some bass would be really nice.

Cutting back on the distortion in some parts would be a good move IMO.
We were thinking about having it as instrumental, but i don't think we're headed in that direction with this song in particular, and we are currently looking for a bassist, so,

And the distortion is like doubly distorted just because of the recording, so, again,

Originally Posted by EineBeBoP
I love it right up till 15 sec, then that transition pretty much sucks. (I know rought draft, but from what I hear might consider changing it a bit.)

at abotu 50 sec. it sounds sorta like everyone jsut going free-for-all. and again at 1:40

Besides thoes parts, it sounds great. (take my opinions in moderation, I know shit about msuic.)

Edit: this is supposted to be constructive criticism. not trying to pick your song apart (although I do a good job)
Ya we're planning on working on that transition... And those "free-for-alls" actually sound a lot better live. Again the recording sucks horribly.

Originally Posted by EineBeBoP
Edit2: Sonofabitch! you froze my winamp :-/
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Old 2004-05-11, 08:09 PM   [Ignore Me] #13
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i really liked the beginning, but the bongo parts just blew the song, and it needs some reworking on transitions, but otherwise its coming along nicely
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Old 2004-05-11, 08:54 PM   [Ignore Me] #14
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...bongo parts? :wha:
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Old 2004-05-11, 09:01 PM   [Ignore Me] #15
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month or so back, am i taking it as you quit it?
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