On Crimson Wings

[AztecWarrior]

Ms. eMa: You appear in 'Wings': http://www.planetside-universe.com/f...&threadid=3811

[Zatrais]

Nice work =)

[eMaGyN]

Thanks guys Your comments mean a lot.

lol Aztec, this part rocks:

"Oh SHIT. These were the elite Terrans. I started praying. All I asked for was that my DNA would remain safe so that I could respawn. If not, my goose was cooked.

Troops started to exit the craft. One came toward me. It was a female in medium armor. She pulled out a Repeater. She said one sentence.

"Life is a bitch. Her name is {{eMaGyN}}"

I heard gunshots, and my world started spinning. All I saw was the night sky, turning and turning..."


and then this... lol:

"I saw a shadowy figure advance toward a Galaxy. I soon spotted the red and black, and shot the figure. It fell down, injured. I walked up and discovered that it was {{eMaGyN}}!

"It's you! I killed you over there!"

"Welcome to the future. Your government's killing your dissidents is no longer working due to rebirthing. Your oppression will not last long. Victory is ours."

I pulled out my MAG-Scatter and cocked it.

"You deserve far worse. If it were up to me and we were alone, you would be tortured. I'm going to make this quick. Be thankful I'm not in the mood to use my MAG-Cutter."

I shot her in the face. She died on the spot."

Ouchy


and here is where you got your information confused:

"We held the base. CDL left. We had lost a lot, though. Other facilities had recieved the same fate."

Lol, CDL doesn't "leave"

lol, great stuff Aztec


eMa

[AztecWarrior]

It's either this or art.

You don't want to see the art.

[AztecWarrior]

Ok, mine's done. Tragic ending (depending on your point of view).

[Tobias]

very nice story I need to visit this section of the forums more, quite a few good ones around, this one is very nice though

[eMaGyN]

!!! Thank you Tobias!

ya.
eMa

[eMaGyN]

I finally got the inspiration to write some more last night. I"m going to try to post up the new stuff sometime later today! So check back sporadically for some excitement!


eMa

[MrVulcan]

Wow, very nice work

This is only the 3rd one ive taken the time to go though here, I will have to read more of them, you guys arent bad.

[IggyWattson]

Very Nice eMa !

[eMaGyN]

She had that feeling they would soon hit the inevitable. Flashes of red emitted to her left. eMaGyN looked over to see Squeeky�s cockpit illuminate. Squeeky quickly glanced over his command display. A number of small dots appeared on his radar screen.
�That�s not good�� Squeeks spoke under his breath and to himself.
�What�s going��eMaGyN commed to Squeeky but was disrupted with Squeeky�s urgent message.
�Manitou!� He screamed, seeing those markers grow in number across his screen. Manitou�s craft jerked from his startle. He glanced behind him to see the faint images of an on-coming air fleet.
�Holy�� Manitou�s steady voice was cut off by eMaGyN�s scream, �Get in your attack positions now!�
In that instant the aircrafts took to higher skies and the ground vehicles begain to form a circle. The dust rolled from their sudden movement. The tanks lined the outer edge of the shape, lending protection to the more vunerable machinery which placed themselves in the center. Thronebeast opened the hatch of his tank and peered through his goggles. He bit on his cigar, letting those ashes mix with sand and cling to the rough texture of his skin. The hatches of the tanks beside him flipped opened, those tankers staring forward to the incoming enemy. Thronebeast sneered.
�Time to kick some ass boys�� He spat out his cigar and gave the enemy one last look. His med nodded, never letting the target leave their sight. They entered the tanks, that small area lighting up, the large crafts shifting from side to side to anchor their weight.
�No one shoots until my command.� Manitou spoke to his troops with confidence. The mosquitoes divided, some in attack position and others as defense for the lesser agile aircrafts. A comm link opened in the platoon leaders� windows, displaying an all too familiar face.
�Shiver�� She uttered in disgust, turning her head slightly to avoid looking at him. �What the Fu��
�Greetings CDL.� Shiver sliced her sentence, �The New Dawn wishes not to have a confrontation. We are on our way to the sanctuary�� There was a sound; too light to hear clearly.
My machine? eMaGyN quickly inspected her rig.
�What the�� Squeeky leaned, peering at the distance in front of him. He saw an obscured mass traveling toward him, he only screamed when he realized it was enemy fire.
�SHIT!� Squeeky jerked his aircraft to the right. The tank shell missed his cockpit but exploded against his left wing. Fire erupted from the side of his aircraft and he began his descent from the skies. His grip tightened on the controls, but nothing could end this spiraling tumble.
�I can�t save it!� he was in a state of panic.
�Eject Squeeky!� eMaGyN screamed as she dove down towards the falling mosquito. CDL�s aircrafts flew into combat and the tanks erupted into a hell fire. eMaGyN chased that trail of smoke down through the speeding artillery.
�Forget it Squeeky! Eject!� She shouted at him and Squeeky frantically pounded on his control panel.
�Its not opening!� The tension was mounting as his spiraling comes closer to the desert ground. Squeeky took off his helmet and began to pound it against the cockpit�s glass.
�Cover your face!� eMaGyN commanded as she aligned her machine barrels with Squeeky�s twisting bird. Sweat tumbled down eMaGyN�s face. Her target was the glass cockpit, but on the underside of the skeet was the fuel tank, which would explode if hit with her machine gun. That desert screaming as it gets closer.
�AaAaAaAahHhhhHHhhhHH!� eMaGyN let out her scream as she squeezed the machine gun trigger. Her bullets pierced the sky in shots of gold and collided against the glass. Immediately it shattered, sending shards of glass to scrape against her craft. Squeeky�s body pulled forward, being sucked out from the gushing air. His helmet shot out from his craft and smashed against eMaGyN�s glass, sending a spider webbed cracks across her windshield.
�Get out!� They only had moments until impact and eMaGyN�s worry climbed. Squeeky screamed as he felt his body being pulled forward, his rib cage separating. He struggled to unlatch his skeet belt.
�God DA�� He began to pound against his chest in hopes to release this hold. Suddenly his body was thrown out of his cockpit and flew into the air. eMaGyN�s body tightened, her grip nearly crushing the controls as she beckoned her scream, swinging her mosquito to the side in hopes to avoid slicing Squeeky�s ejected body. She missed him by inches and pulled up, barely avoiding the desert ground. Squeeky�s aircraft exploded under him, tossing him further.
� I need a Quad to catch our bird!� eMaGyN flipped her mosquito 180 degrees and flew into combat.
�I�m on it!� Pan spoke into her mic and flipped down her helmet visor, sending clouds to chase her cycle. Squeeky free falled against the sharp metallic pieces from his destroyed mosquito. He pulled his parachute string and jerked up as the canvas caught the air. He saw pan�s cycle tear at the desert towards him. His eyes traveled farther back and revealed a NC mosquito flying in the cover of her dust. Trailing her only by inches.
�You have a tail!� Squeeky warned her. Pan glance back, her eyes widened as she saw the machine gun begin to spin. She reached into her thigh hostler and pulled out her pistol and aimed it at the pilot. She puckered her lips to him and then unleashed a fury of bullets to collide against his clear panels. The mosquito pulled up from behind the quad and began to fire down at the speeding Pan.
�You better get in gear! I�m picking you up hot!� Pan screamed against the sound of falling machine gun shells and missed shots. She weaved her cycle in avoidance of the enemy�s ammo and gained ground closer to Squeeky. He was not only meters from the ground. He released his parachute and tumbled towards the earth. Pan whipped the quad cycle around into a 180 and Squeeky landed behind her. That skeeter now facing them, Pan floored it and drove under the craft.
Squeeky reached into her right thigh holster and pulled out a pistol. The mosquito turned and continued his chase. Squeeky fired rounds, struggling against the opposing fire and Pan�s weaving. His shots connected only sporadically.
�It isn�t enough,� Pan spoke to him, keeping her focus on the quickly shifting terrain ahead, �hold on��
Squeeky tightened his grip and pan suddenly swerved to the left. The sparks stopped from the enemy mosquito and Pan pulled back further on the throttle.
�Jump!� Pan yelled back to Squeeky. He was in shock, the quad cycle was going much too fast. Suddenly the quad hit a hill and became air borne. Pan crouched on the seat; she gave Squeeky a side kick to the ribs, sending him sideways off of the quad. Pan leaped from the front of the quad sending her body into a backwards rotation. She flipped into the air, bringing her unmanned quad back into view and that trailing mosquito under them. Bullets exploded from the New Conglomerate craft and Pan gritted her teeth against that rain of pain. Her body tightened, squeezing the trigger of her lone pistol and sending that bullet screaming into her quad�s gas tank. An explosion erupted, engulfing the mosquito into a hell�s flame and tossing Pan to crash against the cracked desert ground.

[Tobias]

Nice work as always

[Squeeky]

Awesome story emmy

[AztecWarrior]

5/5!

[eMaGyN]

New character introduced: Sputty!

�These people know nothing but destruction�� She spoke, standing on the brink of the Sanctuary�s edge, holding her youngest daughter�s hand lightly. An explosion erupted through the vast blue, sending a gush of wind and sand to envelope the three of them.
�They�ve lost all humane feelings�� She whispered to him, looking to her left, staring desperately at her son, �They�ve lost their souls amongst all the bloodshed.� Sputty�s gaze never shifted from the destruction that was unfolding in front of him. The sky seemed to catch fire, sending smoke and flame crashing against their own skin.
�They fight for a reason�� Sputty�s eyes begin to water, making the scenery blur to resemble a painting in motion, �He fought for a reason�� His hands turned to fist, containing the anger for his mother.
�No, he just left us to�� She went to place her arm around him; to hold him closer to her, but Sputty turned. He walked back through the Sanctuary�s dusted entrance way. Cendrea held her daughter closer, watching that sun fade to blackness and those explosions growing brighter.
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�Gather the remainder of your men and go home�� Manitou spoke with a stern voice. He stood only a few feet from Shiver; the silence distanced them farther than those meters. Manitou looked deep into Shiver�s eyes, studying that man for any meaning behind his madness.
�Leave us� We are giving you this chance�� Manitou glared at him, speaking through clenched teeth. Mani turned, tracing his footsteps back towards his aircraft.
�This will never end�� Shiver called out to him, �Not until our people gain their independence.� Manitou stopped and sneered. His breath became drawn out, letting the anger seep from those words.
�We will never let our freedom be placed in danger by such tyrants as the Terran Republic.� Shiver spat after his sentence. His stare burning a hold in Manitou�s back. Manitou turned suddenly and ran through that stark night to be face to face with his enemy. He clutched Shiver�s neck, lifting him from the cracked surface. He bent his head slightly, keeping eye contact with the pain stricken NC commander, �We must gain a republic to preserve our freedoms,� that grip tightening, �You�re people murder each other for loaves of bread.� He tossed him down; the desert dust lifting around them and slowly traveling by way of a cold breeze.
�Manitou!� Shiver screamed to him as Manitou walked back closer to his mosquito, �The Terran Republic will die!� His fatigues were torn, blood trickled from every crevice on his mangled flesh. Blood streamed from the corner of his lip to the outfit emblem on his chest.
�Every last on of them! Dead!� His eyes narrowed, focusing on the outline of Manitou body, �Starting with you!� Shiver gripped the handle in his hand, pointing it�s edge to the back of Manitou. Shots. Echoing over the vast, barren plain; sending flashes of extreme light to erupt from Shiver�s hand.
It pierced through his armor, burning those tunnels through his flesh and splattering his blood into the desert cracks. Things slowed, Manitou glanced down at his hand to see that red drip from his fingers. He took one more step towards his mosquito, only then to fall forward. Manitou collapsed against the dry earth. He traced the desert cracks back to Shiver�s fleeing body. That blood began to fill the desert�s crevices that was closest to him.
�HoOoOoWoOoOo�� He whispered through shortened breaths. It became back, but not from the inevitable night cloak. Manitou laid motionless.