Since it's "uincut", here's my feedback on the whole BoA thing:
- You need 2 operators to make it look a little more tense. One should be eye in the sky and one should be on the ground amidst the troops. This will allow you to switch camera positions while staying on the same combat timeline.
- You need to fly this thing with a joystick (as in xbox controller), imo. You do this very smoothely with your mouse, I admire that, but flaws are still visible.
- Some music during the action would be really nice. Something along the lines of C&C Generals USA Music. And stuff like this for less intense combat, and something like this for action-packed videos.
- Outro needs to be epic. As in both music genre and quality. I can only suggest a music cut (it's in the attachment). As for the other thing - you should glue together some bad-ass action and use it typically as your closing sequence (you can also use it as a teaser).
Other than that, the thing looks awesome.